I stand defeated LOL
Damn you're good at animating (you already know I like the song, O3one so LOL). If I animated that good when I was your grade I'd be working for pixar right now LOL.
Now I really want to start our projects! (Yea, our, unless Alexis doesn't want to be a part of TP... and if he keeps being so friggin' rude at school LOL
Oh, and I take this as a challenge! Be prepared!
yes alexis wants to be part of TP ... Wasn't it kone? Well however good luck in Rumana
O.O Eso sí que es el estilo de comedia que caracteriza a la gente de "por acá" LOL Excelente, las voces fueron lo que me pareció mejor logrado y gracias a ellas los dibujos (que tampoco están mal) se vivificaron.
Me inspiraron a subir cosas en español por aquí... XDDDD ahora veo que es más que posible lograr una buena audiencia aquí en NG sin importar que esté en español.
A huevo, tenemos buena audiencia... Solo es cuestión de sacarla debajo de las piedras de NG.
About destructive coments, you know some people just don't know what "objective criticism" means. They just go and rate things and comment on them based on their stupid emotions and preferences. Like "I don't like anime so you have a 0 even if you outskilled Hayao Miyazaki".
I'm not a professional critic, but I can tell you that a review with headless flaming is something you can let slide through a donkeys ass. Though I can also say that comments such as "I loved it" could do with a bit more constructivity.
(BTW, english is not my first language either LOL, we have to hang on out there!)
As to my own view on your work:
Your drawing and effect skills are quite high-leveled. Your frame by frame was nice as well as your use of blurring.
Nice song choice, try to relate the sections of it better with the visuals next time and it'll be perfect.
You did need more variety in poses; one of the brother's hero-ish stand is used a bit too many times in the animation. You could also give complicated moves a try: Sword swings and more sparring. The fade-out fade-in from blows is good but doesn't really show your own animating skills fully, nor does it make the fight more epic.
I would also suggest exagerating the running poses: make the guy's back more curved forward, as if he tried to be smaller and more aerodynamic to make it feel like they are runing as fast as I think you wanted them to look like.
All in all it was real good and I enjoyed it. Remember to filter out the flaming and trolling and things like that, let them whine all they want and keep uploading stuff!
-Movement in favor of meaningful reviews and respect on newgrounds-
I really liked how clean the graphics look and how your "angels" get the story going. The 9 I give you ^^ and a 5/5
The guy below me is crazy
AWESOME!!! Dude, this quality on graphics here in NG I merely DREAMT of it! Keep up the grat work! you're in for some big future if you decide to dedicate yourself to this as a career!
And... not in the mood of picking a fight but, TheGasyDude... I respect you not liking the style or something, but not even "The Yuyu" and other top animations get close to the fluency of this one. It could be on TV and anyone would have to push their eyeball's out to figure it was made on flash. All I want to say is that at least for the effort put in this, a 5 is absurd...
Holly mother of swordfights!
Trully wonderous. The animation and effects were simply amazing but it is true that many other animations have amazing effects, what really made me love this was the mix of great effects with the actionscript on camera angle changes, speed and the mirroring of the vid randomly. This was what gave you the all out 10! Can't wait to see more! You've inspired me!
My God! That was way cool! I actually thought it wasn't gonna be that good when you started drawing... but then O_O!
That wasgreat! I must say the best part's Fox LOL just priceless!
The drunk dog who's name I can't rmmember is the only part I didn't like that much... but hey the vid's still awesome!
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